My evaluation

I have used a video, with voice over for my evaluation. Please watch.

Final double page spread!

This is my final double page spread.

Final Contents page!

This is my fianl contents page

Final Front Cover

This is my final 'Front Cover'

Double page Draft

here is the draft of my double page spread.

Good Points:

• The picture
• Th amount of writing
• The simplicity of it

The Bad points:

• Title font, not exactly the same as front cover

Draft Contents Page

This is the draft i have created for my contents page.

Good points:

• the colour scheme is the same as the front cover
• I have included several pictures
• I put an editors note in

Bad points:

• The writing might be a bit to large and not enough of it
• there is some negative space but the smaller images

Otherewise i am fairly pleased with my contents page, but will probably make a few change before completeing my fianl contants page.

Draft Front Page

This is my draft for my front cover.

The good points:

• The image fits well
• The red font draw the audiences attention
• I like the font

The bad points:

• i was unable to edit out the white in the middle of the title.
• and in the name 'Ginge'
• its hard to see the writing in the bottom left hand corner

Otherwise im happy with my draft.